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discribing going in to laber
The Deposed King:
I know that sometimes when the water breaks the woman knows what it is. Other times she is embarrassed thinking she peed her pants and doesn't realize there's anything wrong.
Also if the amniotic fluid is green, that's a sign the baby pooped. Normally not a problem unless he/she pooped like right before being born. In that case if the baby breathed in the myconium (first poop really sticky) it can coat their lungs and make them unable to breath.
Also for like a couple hours before giving birth my wife would go into a cleaning frenzy. The nesting instinct they called it. There she was nine months pregnent and trying to move the dryer so she could clean the dust around it.
The Deposed King
cenwolfgirl:
lol thanks thats useful to know hum how can i put that in the book
oh i got the adrenilin thing in witch was realy useful whoever posted that sugestion thanks
(sorry forgot your name) ;D
synobal:
From my prespective I can describe it as
EWWWW
cenwolfgirl:
hum lol but not realy helpful from my pospective
but thanks for trying to help
The Deposed King:
--- Quote from: cenwolfgirl on March 29, 2012, 03:50:37 PM ---lol thanks thats useful to know hum how can i put that in the book
oh i got the adrenilin thing in witch was realy useful whoever posted that sugestion thanks
(sorry forgot your name) ;D
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I figured two of the three can be of some comedic value.
If she's hiding out with a bunch of teens. The oops I peed myself embarrassment could play well. I think the peed myself thing could play even if she's all alone. Even if she quickly realizes what it really signifies.
Then the whole cleaning frenzy. Imagine a bunch of kids watching helplessly as the nine month pregnant woman starts cleaning everything, blaming them for not helping her and then pushing them out of the way 'because they're doing it wrong' once they've been brow beaten into helping.
All they can do is stand by helplessly and protest she's going to hurt herself or the baby. (this nesting suggestion sticks close to my actual experience with the first one, only no teens involved hehehe)
The Deposed King
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