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cenwolfgirl:
cool
another group of books all in tired person but they chang vew points
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or at least some of them are the starwars books e.g. dark force rising by timothy zahn
okay thats geeky but i have the book at hand the rest of that trilagy dose it as well (this is because there is more than one main carictor and serten events happen in diffrent places)

The Deposed King:
I will just say.  Maybe sure you aren't POV shifting in the middle of a chapter or in the middle of the action.  I got lots of nasty comments when I was doing this back in 04-06 for a story I was writing.  Keep it as clean as you can.  Even if you miss some of the good stuff.  You can always have your yoda reflect on how the character's continued flaws harken back to the battle you just missed out on.

That said do it anyway you want.  People who actually read it will be much more relevent to whatever it is you're writing.



The Deposed King

cenwolfgirl:
thats a good sugetion
 :)

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