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So you wrote yourself into a wall...

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Darkshore:
So is the problem that the people your characters would face are simply too powerful? These renegade magic users would most likely have lots of henchmen and have their hands in the pockets of organized crime and even the local police. You could make these magic users very rare in your world. There aren't many of them, but the ones that can are essentially packing a nuclear bomb in the palm of their hand.

Lord Rae:
Thanks for all the suggestions. I'm not sure if anything is gonna work but I might be able to adjust it slightly. Smooth out some of the roughness and at the same patch up plot holes and inconsistencies (more like logic gaps that I've thought of while trying to work this out)....

Oh well. It's gonna take a while but that's how you learn right? :)

Snowleopard:
Good luck.  In my writing I always hated the gaps in logic
you could "Drive a starship through".  Messy and time consuming to fix. >:(

Lord Rae:
Eureka! I think I got it... and I had the tools already planned I just hadn't brought them into the story yet. I just have to alter their origin and influence a bit it and it fixes several issues at once. Thanks again for listening and giving suggestions everyone.

Snowleopard:
Is good!

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