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Darkshore:

--- Quote from: Dresdenus Prime on February 08, 2012, 01:32:58 PM ---I started reading The Hunger Games recently, and I'm actually somewhat irked that it's written in first person present. I'm still really enjoying it, but at the same time it makes me miss my first person past tense-Dresden Files books hehe.

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I think a lot of people get that vibe from that tense (if they notice the tense at all). Not sure why, but it's the reason I feel like I'm better of sticking with what I know. Even though the present tense had a nice urgency to it.

LizW65:
In general I find present tense annoying and pretentious, or else it instills in me a feeling of agitation, kind of the literary equivalent of too much caffeine.  The only instance I can think of where it hasn't bothered me was Sandman Slim (I don't think anyone could reasonably accuse that series of pretention!) and even then it took some getting used to.  I've refused to read a lot of highly recommended books solely because they're written in present tense.  So I would suggest past tense as a more reader-friendly option. :)

Darkshore:

--- Quote from: LizW65 on February 08, 2012, 02:47:02 PM ---In general I find present tense annoying and pretentious, or else it instills in me a feeling of agitation, kind of the literary equivalent of too much caffeine.  The only instance I can think of where it hasn't bothered me was Sandman Slim (I don't think anyone could reasonably accuse that series of pretention!) and even then it took some getting used to.  I've refused to read a lot of highly recommended books solely because they're written in present tense.  So I would suggest past tense as a more reader-friendly option. :)

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Sandman Slim is an instance of this done exceedingly well. I read the whole thing before I even took notice that the tense was present. Shows how engaged I was in the story itself.  ;D

Gruud:
Since this is an active post, and the discussion has shifted somewhat to one's like or dislike of present tense, I thought I'd throw something of mine out.

In my WIP, (3rd person, past tense, multi-POV) there is a character who, for this discussion is best described as a bard (i.e, magic in her songs).

I'm no Tolkien, and have no plans to try and write any songs, but I do describe what the songs are about (mostly ballads and tales of heroes, etc.), mixing the words/import of the song to match the activities taking place around her.

But what I've been doing is witing the song descriptions in present tense.

One, it (hopefully) makes it easier for the reader to differentiate between the song and the surrounding "live" action, and two ... well, it just feels right.

So far, the mix seems to work well enough, but I've no idea if it's too far out of current convention, etc.

Any thoughts?

Darkshore:
I'm not quite sure on this. Generally a song is set apart from the prose in way of formatting. I'd have to see this myself before I could really make a judgement.

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