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Do adverbs still exist?

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Kali:
Excellent writing will always trump the rules.

Most people who break the rules are not excellent writers.

Everyone thinks they're an excellent writer.

Aminar:
I was going to mention Rothfuss.  And Erickson.  And Martin.  I can't consider any of them minimilists.  And yet there are times in all of their writing where description is done perfectly in a few words.

My favorite example is from Memories of Ice.
He uses the phrase "cold as a rapists's touch"
This line on its own conveys cold, unnatural, terrifying, wrongness; all in 5 innocuous small words(except maybe rapist's).  The brilliance there astounds me, and he does it all without adverbs. 

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