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RodimusGT:
Okay so my main character is about to visit a police station in a city which I live near. I'm not sure whether I should or even can try and research what the station looks like and write it accurately in my book, or if I would be better off just using a make believe station.

Opinions? Thanks everyone!  ;D

Bottom The Weaver:
The easiest solution is getting yourself arrested so you can have a free 'tour' of the building.  ;D But I wouldn't recommend that.

I would say just come up with your own layout but try to make it consistent. Police stations are different everywhere, but from what I can tell most of the building is given up to offices for different departments. If it's a small city, a whole floor might be given to holding cells, but a big city might only have a portion of a floor devoted to that because there are more stations in the city to spread them out.

So basically, I'm saying make it up. That's what I'd do, anyway.

Snowleopard:
Some police stations don't even have jails.  Ours here in North Hollywood doesn't - prisoners have to be shipped off to Van Nuys.
You could always go to the local police station and ask about the layout - explaining what you're doing and is there a sort of general overview available.  They have offices and usually a big room for start of shift stuff, locker rooms and shower.  Holding cells, jail cells if they have such a thing.  Evidence lock up.  Probably a weapons area.  I've noticed that there seems to be a front waiting area for the public with a desk behind which are a couple of cops that can help you.  Access to the rest of the station is behind doors, usually locked ones.  And in the parking area - the parking area can be locked off behind big doors in case of trouble.
Some bigger police stations actually have like a lock system where the car comes in and someone closes the big doors behind it then it can move forward towards the back of the station.  The newer the station the more I think they have these systems to protect it from outside attack.  (Result of 9/11 and other terrorist attacks.)

Piotr1600:
If your story has a "neutral-to-positive" portrayal of the police, call 'em up and ask for a tour.
Or ask to speak to their public affairs officer.
Or hell, even the Chief - worst case s/he will point you to the right people.
If your town has a "media coordinator" or "Film coordinator" or some such title - and even small/medium sized towns do these days - contact them and let *them* do the arrangements. That's more or less their job.

Tell them you're writing a story and you need some 'expert advice' to make it feel authentic.
And that you're giving credit in the book/story etc.

As long as you're not doing a hatchet-job of some kind, the police in my area are *amazingly* helpful with questions about how stuff works, procedures, and fun things like volunteer ride-alongs. (Which are *very* educational, in oh-so-many ways.)

meg_evonne:
I'm with Piotr1600 on this. Nothing surely beats an afternoon touring the place. You can also ask to head out with a patrol car. There are civic groups that make those arrangements.

Making it up works for many, but for me, I need to grab up as many of the 'touch' elements as I can to add authenticity to my description. Seeing the sight will spark ideas, add richness, even language as you listen to the conversation patterns around you. Where is it noisy? Where is it quiet? What does the jail smell like? What does the Chief of Police's office smell like.

Yes, you can make it up, but you are denying yourself an easy chance to pull from several people's minds and lives as you walk the halls.

And...yes, I am back in full first draft writing mode--so I'm deep into the senses for several months...

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