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BobForPresident:

--- Quote from: logarithm.and.blues on May 14, 2010, 11:09:01 PM ---I have no idea, honestly. She said that the way I wrote the dialogue made it seem like I, as the author, favored certain characters.

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Maybe she thinks your dialogue sounds like another character somewhere in your work...or mebbe in popular culture. Sometimes I have to remind myself that my main character doesn't always have to talk like Drasek Riven from the Erevis Cale trilogy.  :)

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