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how to say goodbye

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ahra:
Also you don't have to resolve all in the one scene . You can having him going over the goodbye and regret what he said and what he should have said .Or he can write "letters " back to his family with lines like I wish I could say this to you face to face .Also allows you to info dump on your audience a bit as well

meg_evonne:
uhm, as my grandmother used to say.  Time to get off the pot and simply write.  Let us know how it goes.  You'll find a way as you work with it.

Tzarii:
When I joined up in the army I left half of my family like a thief in the night because I did not like them, only leaving an answering machine message.  To those I loved I told them "I am leaving, I am doing what I feel is right.  I could stay here, but I feel I must do something greater with my life.  I love you all, but I am doing this for more than just me.  I am doing this for you, for me and for others.  We will meet again.  I don't know when yet, but we will.  Now I go on to glory."  Or something like that.  I got plastered before I told the people I cared about good bye.

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