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Paynesgrey:
"Because I AM the baddest motherfucker in this here Valley of Death."

Shecky:

--- Quote from: paynesgrey on April 10, 2010, 02:24:20 PM ---"Because I AM the baddest motherfucker in this here Valley of Death."

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Ah, an old classic. :)

meg_evonne:

--- Quote from: Shecky on April 10, 2010, 11:42:23 AM ---Personally, I'd love to see a sniper character hear that and then say, "Fuck that. I'm an assassin and a damn good one. Don't you forget it." :D

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thanks Shecky.  That was what I was going for...  It's gone through three revisions since then and actually is pretty good.  I beefed up the visceral stuff to give it a hard, sharp edge of violence.  Corrected having Gamma and Delta be in two place, other inconsistencies, etc.  Thank you all again.

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