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ludomaniac:
I've found one minor typo so far:

YS8, col.2, para.4 - "You also act a referee...".  Shouldn't there be an 'as' in there?

I will post any more errors I find to this thread.  Fred, if you already have a protocol and/or venue set up for this, reply here and I will use it instead.

ludomaniac:
YS14, col.2, para.2 - "The Summer Court has offered mild assistance to the White Council in the course of the Vampire War..."  Should this be Winter Court?  I'm thinking of the events of SK.
YS14 both columns - Blue highlighter is missing on relevant text next to Harry's and Billy's comments.

Enjorous:
No it's Summer that has offered them support in terms of using Ways and such.

Jaroslav:

--- Quote from: Enjorous on April 04, 2010, 07:27:27 PM ---No it's Summer that has offered them support in terms of using Ways and such.

--- End quote ---
I'm pretty sure it was winter who offered them use of their ways. Isn't that why the council forced Harry to work with Mab in book 4?

Enjorous:
Summer has offered their help but Winter was poised for war so Summer's hands are effectively tied.

And with or without the council Harry had to work for Mab in Summer Knight as she bought Harry's debt from Lea.

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