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Character Intro
Nickeris86:
--- Quote from: Mythcantor on April 01, 2010, 01:18:15 AM ---I really hate EVP. For the uninitiated, that's Electronic Voice Phenomenon, or strange voicelike static that will show up on electronics when ghosts are trying to communicate with you. Invariably, that means trouble. Right now, however, it meant something worse. It meant that I was missing most of the game. "Dammit Sid! I got fifty bucks on this. Can you give it a rest!"
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both of these are hilarious and fit in well with my concept lol ;D
meh:
"They say a good repairman is like a magician. That may be true. I know that my rates are lower than those of several repairmen, which is why I had a job today.
It's amazing how badly even a second-rate football team can tear up a hotel. The glass alone was going to take half an hour to gather and fuse.
Two of the masseurs looked up from their work, one grinned. I'm going to have to shield better, even healing touch practitioners could hear me today."
Nickeris86:
i think i have a good intro now. where the main character is shaving and notices his reflection does not match so he tells the little gremlin thing in it to get out. i named the critter Doug.
mythcantor:
That sounds like a good start, as long as the action picks up quickly. That is, unless you can make shaving an epic battle.
meh:
Or unless shaving can make for suspense hooks.
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