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I, too, am looking for some input.

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Philliph:
WHARRRGARBLE.
i deleted everything.
can this topic be deleted at all?

Philliph:
Was it too much?

Aludra:
Too much to look at while I'm at work. Others probably think something similar.

Philliph:
I trimmed it.

Starbeam:
It might also be a bit of a put-off for people reading that you're unwilling to read anything on your own to help with the writing.  Most of what people would likely say, at least on the technical side of writing, is what you'd find in most books, blogs, etc.  On Writing addresses one thing you do a lot with dialogue tags.  Most of the dialogue has grammar problems, and there are several unnecessary adverbs.  As for commenting on the actual content, it can sometimes be difficult to know what to comment on without a clearer idea of what you're looking for, aside from wanting it to be more "cool."  As well as it being the third chapter and having no idea what's come before, and why you think it needs help.

My opinions, only, other people might feel otherwise.

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