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Creating a Vampire Breed - A critique would be appreciated
Uruboros:
how about for a little while after they created a new vampire the sire is weaker?
to kinda put it in perspective
vampire lord
vampire knight 1st class
vampire knight 2nd class
vampire knight 3rd class
vampire 1st class
vampire 2nd class
vampire 3rd class
newborn
when a vampire knight 1st class creates a new vampire the knight becomes a 2nd class knight
because they must put their own power into the new vamp.
every 50 years or so a vamp upgrades it's class so a vamp must sink 50 years of life into a new vampire which is a population control of its own plus newborn vampires cant make more
The Corvidian:
Throw out the sunlight thing, that was added by F. W. Murnau.
comprex:
--- Quote from: The Corvidian on June 26, 2009, 04:18:15 PM ---Throw out the sunlight thing, that was added by F. W. Murnau.
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I think he should keep it, it could lend itself quite nicely to a variety of plot arcs. Especially if vampires can turn out considerably different as they 'age' depending on choices they make.
Starbeam:
--- Quote from: The Corvidian on June 26, 2009, 04:18:15 PM ---Throw out the sunlight thing, that was added by F. W. Murnau.
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And having looked that up and verified it, I think I'll be remembering that and have a little snippet for my vampires. Hmm...that could make things more interesting..
The Corvidian:
--- Quote from: comprex on June 26, 2009, 04:21:05 PM ---I think he should keep it, it could lend itself quite nicely to a variety of plot arcs. Especially if vampires can turn out considerably different as they 'age' depending on choices they make.
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Sunlight could "turn off" their abilities.
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