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Shecky:
Fair enough. I kind of had the "whoa, wait, when did everything start bogging down?" feeling myself, but only before I re-read the series. The slowdown has been building up since the beginning; it's just not obvious because they somehow manage to punch through and succeed early on.

the neurovore of Zur-En-Aargh:

--- Quote from: DragonFire on January 19, 2009, 10:11:26 PM ---My biggest probelm with Matrix Reloaded?

The completely gratuitous Zion orgy scene.
I mean, wtf??

--- End quote ---

We want to see these people are Cool, so big multi-racial dance party with visible gay couples and triads if you look closely. Works for me.

Shecky:
yay.

DragonFire:

--- Quote from: neurovore on January 20, 2009, 03:24:59 AM ---We want to see these people are Cool, so big multi-racial dance party with visible gay couples and triads if you look closely. Works for me.

--- End quote ---
Yeah...just don't see how it fits into the plot.
Unless that's how Zion celebrates all announcements of doom

Multi-racial orgy.

Guardian 452:
I got the feeling it was how Zion celebrated everything.

One could almost imagine people going about their day to day life, having conversations starting with "You going to the orgy tonight?"

I also got the feeling that they really encouraged breeding, so....

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